Okay this is turning out to be harder than pulling your own teeth out with a pair of rusty pliers but I've finally cobbled together a synopsis, ignoring most of the stuff I've read about them so how does it look?

By the time you read this I will be...

Hi Geoff, I'll take a look, & you're welcome to post it in the Synopsis & Outline group.


- NaomiM

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The thing to remember in a synopsis is you are selling the plot and the character to the Agent. The fact that the novel is written in the second person is a feature of the prose and will be obvious from the opening chapters. You should mention it in the synopsis, but I don't think it should be the be all and end all of the synopsis. If the Agent is in two minds about taking on a novel written in the second person, then you still have the chance to sell them a great storyline by way of the synopsis.