To clean up a rough draft, one needs a clear head.
To get a rough draft with enough scope to become a novel, one needs to become seriously unbalanced, |
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This is the core of Dorothea Brande's immortal book
Becoming a Writer, which I don't think I've recommended on WW for at least 5 minutes, so I shall now. She talks about writing as divided into being a writer - the unbalanced, open-ended, frightening, wonderful messy bit to do with inspiration as Adam Phillips discusses - and an editor, revising. You need both, and it's helpful to know which the job entails on any one day. Of course there's an overlap, but they use different aspects of the human character.
For myself, I find alcohol, distress, hunger, lack of sleep,
can liberate my writerly self from the cool grip of the editor, to the benefit of the first draft, but all are disastrous for the genuinely editorial part of the job.
The Artist's Way is another, more recent classic about how to get at your writer - aka, your inspired self.
Emma