Thanks to some very helpful feedback from Cholero and Harry, I tossed the old version of Missing Pages and started again. I am very eager to hear what people think of this. Does the voice work? Is it emotionally involving? Does it make you want to read on? What are your overall impressions?
I would greatly appreciate it if anyone had the time to have a look at this.
Thanks in advance.
Saz
Missing Pages Chapter 1