I've just finished on of those dreaded info dump sections that really should be avoided like the plague.

However writing a first person narrative with virtually no dialogue it was pretty much the only way I could work this info in there.

I'd be greatful if anyone could give it the once over and tell me if I have to go back to the drawing board.

Cheers

Geoff

Isn't it apt that the section is about memory loss when I never remember to post a link!

Amnesia