I've just uploaded the opener to Green and Pleasant, which was posted a couple of years ago, but which few current members will have seen.

It's very black adult comedy, and I'm hoping won't offend anyone on the grounds that it's equally offensive to all. A fine line perhaps.

I'm planning to turn this into a novel, so would love views generally but also on whether you think the pace would be readable for an entire novel, or if it needs to slow down to sustain a novel.

Thanks all

Andrea

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And here's a link -

Green and Pleasant