Hi I'm Ali,

I've been a member for a while, but I've just uploaded my work for the first time. (how scary is that!!) I've uploaded the first 3 chapters of my contemporary romance JC BLUE EYES.

If the comments aren't too bad I may post some more.

Take a look if you like an occasionally humourous ( I hope!),light romantic read.

Let me know what you think,

Cheers,

Ali :-)

Hi Ali,

why don't you join a group, that's the most reliable way to get feedback? There's plenty of space in our lovely little Women's Fiction group.

Also, you're more likely to get comments if you post smaller chunks, usually around 2000-3000 words.

Best,

Casey

Thanks for that advice Casey.

I'd love to join your group.
I'll go check and it out now.

Ali :-)

Hi Ali,

You'd be very welcome in the group.

We are only small, but we offer good constructive and above all - honest advice, and we also have a laugh too.

We were originally called Romance, but changed to Women's Fiction to attract more members.

Hope to see you there.

Katerina

Thanks for the welcome :-)

I've heeded your advice and edited my original post down to a more managable 1,670 words now.

Ali