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Looking Glass Vacation - revised
by optimist at 21:38 on 24 September 2006

This is an attempted rewrite - I am having a hard time with this story and would appreciate all comments - please?

Sarah

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sorry - http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/show_article.asp?group_id=101&article_id=15695

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