The first part of a mini-novella I've started working on, after being inspired by the recent 'Guys and Dolls' thread in the lounge. This story just seemed to be waiting there, and I'm having great fun exploring the issues and being able to actually write again.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/15646.asp

Your comments, as ever, are appreciated - and this one I am actually going to finish!!!

Thanks

JB

I have now added the second section to chapter one of this novella.

JB