I joined WriteWords recently and would be interested in seeing what kind of punishment is on offer if they put their words up on the introduce your work forum. I put in a few screamers for this very purpose. =)

More seriously, I am in the middle of a major rewrite of a science fiction short story that was well received by a small crowd and would be happy to hear any comments on the rewrite of the first part.

You can find the offending assortment of words at the end of this link.

Thanks in advance for any words of wisdom.

Crutch part 2

has gone up in the sci-fi forum.

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Oops that was supposed to be HTML. Crutch part 2.