Hello all,
I know that this short story (actually, that description is perhaps stretching it a little) has been around for quite a while, but I've recently revised and edited a lot of it after lots of useful comments from a few readers on the site.
It tells the story of Iain and Frida. It was suggested by the rather glamorous editor of the story that a good subtitle would have been: "The story of two silly people who thought they could laugh at Fate but who got really fucked instead." Which I kind of like.
I hope there is something in there that you all like.
Part 1:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13262.asp
Part 2:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13348.asp
Part 3:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13418.asp
Part 4:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13561.asp
Part 5:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13691.asp
Part 6:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/14099.asp
all the best,
Iain