Hello All

I've just discovered this site which I think is an excellent forum for writers. I've finished writing my debut novel last year and am now going through the unknown and exciting journey of trying to get a literary agent and ultimately getting published. I've published the opening chapter and would like to see what you think.

Cheers
Kenny

Kenny... take a tip from one entrapped victim who has given up all hope of escape from this web... get out now while you still can... Huh? ... oh damn... too late...

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