Hi, I am writing here to attract people to read and comment my sitcom pilot draft.

Please leave replies on what you think of it, the favourite parts, the parts that didn't quite work.

The details are on the uploade work section, just click my username and follow it there.

Thanks
Asim

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*now without stupid mistakes.*

Hi, I am writing here to ask people to read and comment on my sitcom pilot draft.

Please leave replies on what you think of it. I am also enjoying reading through the posts and other people's work, it's given me more ideas and certainly a greater insight into writing.

The details are on the upload work section, just click my username and follow it there.

Thanks
Asim