Hi all

I've finally got round to becoming a full member, so I thought I'd exercise my rights by posting some work for comment. It's the opening of a novel, Pentecost Hotel, which revolves (or rather collapses) around a small time rock band which, I am reliably informed, is going to be the hardest thing in the world to sell to a publisher. Hurrah. This is the link (if it works):

http://writewords.org.uk/archive/14702.asp

Any and all comments appreciated.

Cheers,

J