Hi,

I have this morning posted A Ghost Story to the Short Story I group and would really love feedback and commentary.

This is the first story I have completed since the age of 8! I began it, wrote the present action parts about two years ago, and wrote in the interior story over the course of the following months and with a struggle. (Isn't it odd how the good bits can come easy sometimes and the not-so-good bits only as the result of an uphill struggle?)

I am interest in commentary on all aspects of the story, although the weaknesses I am most aware of are the interior story dragging and coming off a bit flat, and possible mixed dialect (though I have tried to avoid writing in 'local colour'.

If you notice something that you think may deserve a red flag, please let me know!

Thanks very much!!!

Anne Marie aka Anisoara