Hello everyone!

I'm a new member of this site and I've uploaded the first chapter of my novel (The State That I Am In. This is the first full length novel that I've done. I'm an aspiring literary fiction writer and desperately seeking an agent or frankly at this stage just some feedback on the damn thing! (The thanks but no thanks letters can get you down). I'd be very grateful for any comments I can get!

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here's the link just to make life a bit easier!

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/14379.asp