Hello everyone.

I posted on the beginners forum, but it seems a bit quiet over there and so I wondered if any of you would be kind enough to have a look at my uploaded work.

It's my first attempt at writing in the first person, and I just want to know if it works or not. Be as brutal as you like.

Very much appreciated,

Andie

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13763.asp