I've now completed the first draft of this novel and want to know whether the story works. It is divided up into ten sections. Each section tells a different story and I would hope that they are all thematically linked. I've looked over some of the earlier chapters and there isn't much I want to change but I've noted many of the comments subscribers have made, particularly those in relation to punctuation.

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