The climactic chapter of Part One.

I spent a little time on this one, and truly hope it's as effective as I want it to be. The contrast between past Gothica and future Utopianism is plain, but does it work?

Oh, and yes, there is someone who we've all been dying to see...

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13402.asp

Comments appreciated. And a huge thank you to all the supporting and encouraging remarks I've had so far. This has not been an easy journey so far, and you're help has simply been imperitive to this novel's development.

JB