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The cries of the children
by sazzyjack at 11:27 on 03 March 2006

Hi all,
I have uploaded my latest piece of flash fiction and would love any constructive feedback on how to make it a little tighter. All feedback gratefully recieved.
Thanks in advance.
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/13235.asp

Saz

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