I've uploaded another chapter of my children's novel. However, I'm damned if I can find where I put it! I tried for Novel II but it may have gone straight to the archive. Anyway...if anyone can find it, I'd be glad for your comments.
Sue

Yep, it's there in the archive: goody, I'll read it this weekend, I've enjoyed the story of Faye so far!

Best

Tim

P.S. You can edit the allocation of the piece, to put it in Novel II

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Ahh, you've already done that! Strike the above, it's redundant (like so much of my writing!)