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Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Sue H at 09:53 on 06 February 2006

Just added the first chapter of a young adult novel I'm re-working at the moment to the YA group, and would be really very grateful for any comments!

Sue

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Moved it to the archive if anyone would care to take a look. I'd appreciate comments as I don't think I'm getting very far with this!

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/12818.asp

S

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Colin-M at 10:04 on 06 February 2006

ah, you beat me!!

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Sue H at 10:05 on 06 February 2006

Ha! Thought I might!

Go on then, be honest....is it any better??

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Colin-M at 10:06 on 06 February 2006

just reading now

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Sue H at 10:11 on 06 February 2006

Taking yours on the train with me to lunch!

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Account Closed at 18:19 on 06 February 2006

Sue,

I have read, enjoyed and commented.

JB

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Re: Ripped Apart - chapter 1
by Sue H at 05:46 on 09 February 2006

Moved it to the archive if anyone would care to take a look. I'd appreciate comments as I don't think I'm getting very far with this!

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/12818.asp

S

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