I was interested in upping the ante on my story writing this year, and aim for something a bit more mature. By this, I wanted to explore weaving some social comment, in a satirical way, into some of my stories, and this is what I've come up with.

I'm exploring the theme of religious tolerance from a skewed perspective.

This short short novella is intended to be a three or possibly four parter, and I'm interested in any comments you care to make.

Though posted in horror, I'm not entirely sure it is a horror story. At least, not at this point.

JB

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Here is the link:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/12667.asp

P.s I should add that this work is not for those of a prudish or sensitive religious manner. You'll only be offended, and then I'll have to sue you for infringing on my rights. ;)

Still available for comment if anyone wants to give it a go. You won't get bitten by Satan, I promise.

JB

Refreshing this for the last time, then I'll follow with part 2. Comments welcome. Go on, you know you want to!

JB