Hi,

I've been posting bits of my novel, Sirocco Express, in Novel 1 for a while now, but if anyone from the wider WW community would like to review any bits from it I'd be very grateful. So grateful that if you have a specific piece that you'd like me to look at I'll certainly oblige - just let me know at the end of any comments you make. All the chapters I've posted so far are still visible from my profile. Chapter 1 (2nd version) is always a good place to start...

Best

smudger