Hi

Just read Cymro's post, and I too have been loitering around this site like a bored teenager in a Safeway car-park. I've been knocked out by the quality of the writing available here.

I've been writing for a while but have reached the stage where I need feedback, constructive or otherwise, because I'm finding it increasingly difficult to judge what I'm doing in an objective way - I can see problems but at the moment, I'm just glimpsing the bare outlines of these problems, so I'd appreciate anything you might have to say about this piece

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/12122.asp

Thanks

Guy

Hi Guy, welcome to WW. I've left you a comment.

Nell.