A short story (1220 words) on the theme of breakdown. If anyone would like to comment/crit I'd be chuffed to bits! :-))

Tabatha: where is it???? Help!

Richard

Richard, I can't find it either, it's not on her profile - it looks as though she's deleted all her uploaded work. Please come back Tabitha!

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Tabitha, if you're there I did try to find this to read yesterday, but you'd already removed it. It's difficult to keep up with all the reading on site, and sometimes it takes a day or two to get to new work; sometimes one misses it altogether, especially if it's not in a group.

Calling Tabitha! The suspense is killing!

Richard

Sorry, guys - dunno what happened there! I'll repost it now ...:-)

Here's the link -
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/2448.asp

Tabitha -- Found at last! Thanks: I couldn't go on with all the tension so have had to lie down in a dark place. Will read the piece soonest.

Richard

Tabitha:

I guess the best is always worth the wait.

Brilliant.

Richard