...and I've just finished a secion of my magnum opus. Since I'm writing this thing all out of sequence, I realize it's difficult for anyone to comment constructively, but any who fancies having a crack, plese click here

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/11335.asp

And please do remember, I am as hard as teak (he said modestly) so where it says 'Go on, I can take it', it really means that. Strap on your hobnail boots and get stuck in. Let your sadistic side out to play.