Hi folks,

I haven't posted here for quite a while but I've been beavering away in my usual disjointed, understadable-to-nobody-but-me fashion. I didn't bother putting anything up because it would be impossible for anyone else to get the context, since I'm writing out of sequence, but this piece is backstory, important to the character development (at least I think so) and it can be read in isolation from the rest of the story. I'm aiming for intensity here, and I'm not sure I've kept it up, particularly in the final third of this longish piece (3500 words). Let me know if I've failed, and don't even think of sparing me.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/11247.asp