Script for a short film.

Bobby's chaotic life is interrupted when her mum promises a trip to Wales for Bobby and her two half-brothers. But her new boyfriend might upset the apple cart.

Hi Neil,
The best way to get feedback is to join a group and to upload your work to the group. As per comment I've just made on your script, I hope you will crit and be critted as WW works through reciprocality. Lots to like in your script and it was a good length for people to take on - it would be a shame to see it overlooked out here in the wilderness!
G

Hi Gaius, Thanks very much for taking time to comment and to suggest a group I might want to join. I appreciate it.
Neil