Commencing the third and final part of my serialised novel 'I Was A Teenage Antichrist'. This chapter catches up with some characters who got left behind and acts as a bridge between the peril that was and the peril yet to come.

Any comments appreciated, partuclarly about the pace as now events in the story race towards their conclusion. Only five chapters left!!!

JB

Still hoping for some more comment on this! Cheers!

JB

Here is the link:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/10931.asp

Still hoping for some more feedback here, even if you just read a section.

Thanks

Jb

Any chance?

Waxy,
I admire your persistence. I think there is a shortage of comments like some malaise. For a few months I uploaded nothing, then when I 'returned' and put up my last two efforts the response in the way of comments was very 'poor'.

I wonder if it is that I have never joined any of the Writing Groups? Anyway, hope you get some response... I'll have a look myself.

Len