Again, here is the updated, and hopefully improved, first part of chapter one of STANDING AT THE END OF THE WORLD.

Chapter One, part one, version 3

Note that this is only the first half of chapter one!

Note that Version 3 is only slightly different to version 2.

If you haven't taken a look at version 2 yet I would be most grateful for any criticism you care to give on version 3, and please don't be timid. Go on, I double dare you!

Thanks in advance.

Grinder