Hello all.

I've just uploaded something into the Young Adult group. I'm totally lost for a title, so I've just called this piece "Character Test" as it's an experiment to see if I can these characters across.

The difficult part here is that one of the characters can't speak, but I want to make sure I give him some personality and not have him be a token disabled person (like the kid in All About Me)

I'd be interested to know if I'm close to pulling this off.

Here's a link: character test

cheers,

Colin M

Colin,

I've just found this post and I'm trying to link to Character Test, but it's not letting me. Has it gone?

It's gone through a few changes. I'll put the latest version up and make it visible. Five mins...

Okay, it's up there under its new title At The Edge

Most of the comments will be out of date as it has gone through lots of changes. There are three chapters. You might have more to say about 2 and 3.

Thanks