Hi everybody. I've uploaded my first piece of work to this site and I'd love as many people as possible to read it and give me feedback.


I was writing a letter to somebody and couldn't decide on what I really wanted to say. All my random trains of thought kept popping up, and by the time I'd finished I realised I had a poem/letter chimera.

I'm not sure if it's finished yet. If it was a letter it would be finished when I'd said all I'd wanted to say- but it's not really about me and the person I wrote it to anymore so I guess it'll be finished when it sounds right.

So everybody please tell me what you think!

Ian