A new story in the zodiac series - all comments welcome. Thanks.

I've just noticed that Two Kisses has reached the number two spot in 'Most Popular'. This means lots of you have visited but not commented, and that's fine. This is an experimental piece, and what I'd really appreciate is an answer to just one question - does it work?

If you've taken a look but haven't had time to comment could you leave me a message here - just 'yes' or 'no' will do.

Thanks muchly, Nell.