Continuing my serialised novel 'I Was a Teenage Antichrist'. This part catches up with our hero, still adrift and desperate for a way out of Limbo.

I'm looking for some comments, and it doesn't really matter if you haven't read any of the story previous to this as each chapter is kind of designed as a tale in itself. Book Two is now drawing to a close, just two more chapters, so any advice on pace etc, will be greatly appreciated!

Thanks

JB

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Oh, it can be found in the 'horror' forum, by the way...

Still here if anyone wants to have a read.

JB

Splendid, JB. Looking forward to it!

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Thamks Sue. I'm still hoping for a few more comments on this one! Thanks to those who have already read it.

JB

Still up here for another week.

JB

I am refreshing this chapter for the last time, in the hope of a little more feedback from you guys.

JB