Hey folks.

I recently uploaded a story under the name "Untitled Ghost Train Story".

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/1791.asp

Now it needs a proper name.

I don't want to just call in 'Ghost Train', there's not enough to it.

I considered 'Last Train to GhostVille' but am not sure that it suits. Plus it's not necessarily the last train.

"Bats and rats and deformed cats" named after a line in the story. Is another I thought of

Other considerations:

"Off the rails"
"Ghosts on the Line"
"Fairground Phantoms"

I've got a list of words, but nothing seems to go together particulalry well.

Any other suggestions gratefully received!

Ben, what is the story actually about though? Maybe the name comes from the very centre of it?

Ben -
I've just been to read the story, and the best names I can come up with are:

How about "Brothers in Fear"
"They Are Not Real"
"Interrupted Ride"
"Fearful Fun"

All the best, JohnK