I uploaded this poem over the weekend and it is in the main perhaps no different from many that I and many others compose except it is displayed as written and I had the idea and wrote it all in about 10 minutes in total.

It is the first of what in essence is an experiment in raw emotional poetry namely

Idea . write post only very minor changes and these as I write the poem and read it through.

It may of course be the only poem in the experiment mainly because I may not get any more formed poems emerge so quickly although I dont doubt, if history is anything to go by more will emerge.

I should be interested views form others as to the way they compose poetry do you write and post,
write leave it and polish it.
or whatever

thank you

david 29/09/03