Hello,

just uploaded chapter one of current project. This has been up before and was completed as "Get Even Get Girl Get Lost" - a three part novel for Young Adults. Unfortunately, parts two and three were pretty shit, so I've dumped them, reworked part one and planned out a whole new novel, called "Spiral" (link below).

I'm not so sure about the target audience anymore; the first few chapters are fairly lighthearted, but the novel get's quite dark later on.

Any help appreciated.

SPIRAL

Thanks,

Colin M

Now revised, and about a thousand words shorter!

Colin

Chapter Two[/ur] is up now.

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I screwed that up - but the link works.