Ok, been away from this site for a while, had to seriously revised all the episodes for my TV idea to try and improve on them, cause I gotta be honest, the orignal stories were pretty naff! But after seeing the new Doctor Who series, I've used that as an influence to try and make the stories a bit more interesting. Still, I would love peoples opinions and ways to suggest improvements.

Also, my work is now registered, thought I better get round to it sooner or later if I'm going to start sending these off to agents and what have you.

Listed below is the first episode of my series. It's currently in PDF format, cause I think it's looks better this way than rich text. But if there is any problems with it, please let me know and I'll change it to rich text.

Please make any comments you want about it. I need to know as I'm seriously trying to push for this now and I need to know what other people think about it. Thanks.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/9784.asp