Hi, Rosie, and welcome to WriteWords.

I'll post a link to the poem so people can find it -
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/27148.asp
- but it's best to join the Poetry Group -
http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/58.asp
- and post a link to it there, too, so the poets on this site will see it.
- NaomiM