I've shaken the dust of this novel, and I'm now in the process of restructuring the piece.
Since its previous outing about twelve months ago I've recognised the need to strengthen the structure and flesh out the characters - especially Brian - so as to explain why he behaves as he does.
You can read the Prologue and Chapter One at
The Darkest of Lies
Please let me know what you think
All the best
jumbo (not jimbo)