Hi Everyone

Please let me know what you think, a very short version of this was publiched this weekend in the Daily Mail, but I am looking for thoughts, etc I think its too long and people get bored if its too long!

Thanks in advance!

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/9207.asp

Paula - why not post this in the Travel Writers group? You'll be most welcome and you'll find at least one other Guardian competition winner there!

Richard.