Hope I'm not putting my foot in it making a whole topic just for me, but I recently uploaded a sample chapter (number 5 to be precise) of a story thingy I'm doing at the moment. I know horror isn't to everyone's tastes, so this particular exerpt isn't scary or anything at all, just a tad violent instead...

Any feedback on my chapter (aptly named Blood Lust part 5) is welcome and appreciated.