Later today I plan to upload the opening section of my second chapter (Missed Call.) I'd appreciate any comments, and want to stress that this includes criticisms. I don't want anyone to rip it apart, but all the comments I have so far are compliments. I'm sure there are things wrong with it, and would like any advice on how to improve.

Thanks a lot.

BEN

I've been trying to get round to reading that at some point. It's the on that starts at the end of cool runnings isn't it?

I'm not planning to clutter this site with my own ranting novel efforts, but I have uploaded a sample chapter of Blood Lust, a little horrorish story I'm amusing myself with.

Anyway, I'll try and read this over the next couple of days, if not sooner.