Dear All,

A few of you read my short story and made some really incisive comments which I've now reacted to - and I'd really appreciate feedback on the new & improved vers!

It's contemporary fiction, somewhat caustic & (hopefully) a little 'out there':

http://writewords.org.uk/archive/24707.asp



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*Reasons to be Cheerful*

...bugger I wish I could spell!!