I have just posted the first chapter of a novel I wrote last year.

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/8430.asp

I enjoyed writing it, but am unable to see the wood for the trees when it comes to judging whether it is any good or not.

I would very much appreciate a critical eye from the WW community.

I am desperately trying to 'move on', so any thoughts, observations, suggestions and insights would be much appreciated.

Thanks in advance

Beadle