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  • Is this tweed and plain or does it work?
    by Courtney S Hughes at 12:42 on 18 January 2005
    I have recently posted a short scene from a new play I am writing. I am slightly worried that it is the following:

    1. Predictable
    2. Un-original
    3. Bland

    Nothing like selling your own work is there!

    I would appreciate any comments anyone may have on this piece, it's not very long.

    The title: The Visitor
    (you can find it through my profile or perhaps even in the theatre section of the Writewords Archive)<BR><BR><B><Added><BR><BR>Sorry, I missed out point 4. Clichéd
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