Hi, I'm a new member and have just uploaded a piece of work - the opening chapter of my first novel, Come Watch, Come Watch Me Burn. I'd appreciate any comments whatsoever. The book is made up of thirteen chapters in total all of similar length. They are rather long chapter's so please don't feel you need to read all of it in order to comment - we're busy people, after all.

Looking forward to hopefully hearing from one or two of you.

Sam