Hi, I have just posted a short story in the archive section. Link below:

http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/24413.asp

Would love to get some feedback on it so that I can give it another revision.

Thanks

Hugh

Hi Hugh and welcome to WriteWords.

It's usually best to upload the story in one of the writing groups for feedback - I see you've joined lash Fiction II, but there's also the Short Story Group if prefer:
http://www.writewords.org.uk/groups/68.asp


- NaomiM

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lash fiction, oops, fraudian slip there.

"Fraudian"? Clear indication of both the disdain for a school of thought and proof of its validity.

I like Lash Fiction. It's a belter!

Lol Cherys.

Fraudian

Too true, Gaius. I probably had in mind 'fraulein' and her whip.

Am loving Lash Fiction! Who's going to propose a new group???

Thanks Naomi. Will join up with the short fiction group.

Hugh

short fiction group

Dying to tell a midget joke but I'd probably get into trouble.


So, what sort of uploads do you envisage in a Lash Fiction group, Jem?

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midget

I mean 'Staturally challenged'.

Actually I mean a very short joke.

Hmmm, exactly how deep does this hole get?

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Maybe we should have a group for puns and anecdotes, and blitz the Readers Digest.