Hi folks,
I posted these two uploads over Christmas and didn't garner any comments for either (which may be a comment in itself!) but if anybody would care to take a hatchet to them now then please knock yourself out. Both are my latest offering from my novel.
First
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/8081.asp
and then
http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/8159.asp
I'm hoping to move the plot on a little with the next sections, so all contibutions gratefully received. Thanks.