Hi all,

I'm having a trial run at membership with my free month. I'm most interested in this forum and discussing with fellow writers.

I have uploaded the first 1500 words of a story I'm working on and I'd very much appreciate some honest feedback.

Thanks

(apologies if I have posted twice, my first post seems to have gone astray, maybe it's moderated?)

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http://www.writewords.org.uk/archive/8174.asp by the way

I've given this a proper title now. "His dark secret".

Thanks for all the comments, I'm quite happy with chapter one now.

B